Critique

These images are better without text.
I am giving too much information about sadness of war.
The soldiers' images already give viewers war images.
And exploded car and lonely girl images as backgrounds add
dangerous and sad atmosphere to it.
It gives overwhelming sadness with the war poems.

#2 with hand written text (scanned)

#1 with hand written text (scanned)

Final image #2

This soldier is running toward the war zone where someone has to die.

Final image #1

This image has an image of a girl with a doll as background.
And a soldier is coming toward viewers from the girl with a doll.
This represents that he is going away from where he originally belongs.

testshot #2

Test shot for the first project
influenced by David Levinthal

testshot #1

test shot for the first project

influenced by David Levinthal

Preparing

Models and Backdrops